This is a valley of ashes
— a fantastic farm where ashes grow like wheat into ridges
and hills and grotesque gardens;
where ashes take the forms of houses and chimneys and rising smoke
and, finally, with a transcendent effort,
of men who move dimly and already crumbling through the powdery air.
Occasionally a line of gray cars crawls along an invisible track,
gives out a ghastly creak,and comes to rest,
and immediately the ash-gray men swarm up with leaden spades
and stir up an impenetrable cloud,
which screens their obscure operations from your sight. (Fitzgerald 27)

What do you think the second paragraph means here?
ReplyDeletePurely amazing. Fitzgerald was great.
@Maria that it is not really a busy place...I think.
DeleteWhat do you think Fitzgerald is talking about when he says "ash-gray men"
ReplyDeleteWhy do you think he uses a simile when he says "where ashes grow like wheat into ridges?"
ReplyDelete@Damien it's because he's trying to explain how fast the "ashes grow".
Delete@Brandon it's because they're all dirty from the ashes.
ReplyDeletewhat does it mean when the cars crawl in the second paragraph
ReplyDeleteWhy did you pick this as your poetry? I am curious.
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