Us women may love with our hearts
but first everyone lusts with their eyes.
Everyone, consists of men being men.
They tell us what we want to hear to sway our over-whelmed loving minds.
We have dreams of peace and harmony for our entire marrige
Then the harsh reality of life comes and shows us the translucent light
that is the failing of our love.
I understand that you used the problem she has with men, but could you encorpurate other hardships she faces?
ReplyDeleteVery good use of figurative language
ReplyDelete@Marc like what other hardships could I use?
ReplyDelete@Brandon thank you, and I'm working on the song right now!
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